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This is my main character that I've been talking about before. :iconhappygrinneplz:

She's my OC. Her name is Leafy. And as you thought, she's..................green! (talk about creativity~~ :iconohoho-plz:)

This is my old drawing, though. I currently doing a re-design of her. Mostly because of her hair design that's kinda hard to draw. And not to mention she's not stands out among the other casts... :iconazusapif: (...I mean, come on! She's the main character and all...)

So... I really need a feedback right now. Please comment and tell me what you think I should do to make this OC of mine better~! :iconsmile-luplz:
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Hi! I'm all for simple characters, really, and I'm not particularly creative with designs, but I'll try to help :iconteeheeneplz:

What does Leafy do? Does she fight, or is she more peaceful? o uo
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~leafprojector Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:iconyuihmmplz:hmm... let's see...

...she's a tsundere type-a girl.

...and she tends to fight really often, because of her circumstances... but she's actually quite peaceful at heart.

Sorry if it's kinda confusing.. :iconohoho-plz:
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Hm, since her gauntlet is NOT. A WEAPON, :iconhakaselolniplz: I'm assuming she fights using a supernatural power!

You says she doesn't stand out among other casts... perhaps you could make her hair "fiercer" befitting of a tsundere... or more sporty or tomboyish, like tied-up or stuff.

These are just suggestions though; her design is really neat, and I know next to nothing about her! Please let me know more!
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~leafprojector Jan 23, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
-Supernatural power? uhmm..... ahh... well.... you see... :iconusmileplz:

-I don't know.. You see, she's originally not a tsundere.. Bad things happened to her. Leave her with permanent scars, both physically and mentally.

Her nature change a bit after the 'incident', which makes her to be a little bit of short-tempered person.

But other than that, she's actually a soft and cheerful girl who like to help others. And a reeally kind person at heart.

That's why I don't want to make her hair to look "fiercer". :iconsmile-luplz:
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I AM SO SORRY. I haven't had time to really come online and reply all my stuff lately. :iconyuicraiplz: Anyway, Leafy here has a pretty interesting backstory... to be honest what defines a character to me is on the inside. She's pretty well-fleshed out as she is, and you've done a great job! I'm not sure if there's anything more I can suggest. Sunimasen! :iconteeheeneplz:
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~leafprojector Jan 30, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh, that's okay! I actually decided that I'll made no changes to her base-design after all... :iconyuinodplz:

Thanks for your kindness and support! :iconsmile-luplz:
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No worries! Will look out for more Leafy in the future! :iconhappygrinneplz:
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=BrightenYourSmile Jan 15, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
This deviantion is featured [link]

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~leafprojector Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you so much for the feature!!! :iconmioforgivemeniplz:
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=BrightenYourSmile Jan 16, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Welcome :D
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